大學(xué)六級寫作熱點(diǎn)話題作文
On College Students Renting House off Campus
It is normal that the college students rent house off campus at present. There are many reasons they do it. Although their behavior is supported by their different ideas, I find the thing which they feel is reasonable has advantages and disadvantages, either. Now I will show them as follows:
On one hand, I think the advantages about living off campus is we can have a very quiet circumstance to achieve our daily work. Besides, the convenience devices and life condition could make us live comfortably. On the other hand, by the way, I can list many disadvantages of leaving off college. Rarely do we have the time being studied in the university, if we rent the house off campus, we will lost the golden time when we lead the vivid life span with roommates together. What is more, the parents will be worried about the students who study, and live without colleges atmosphere, and I feel we should learn in campus where has many useful information help us to study, and find a satisfactory job.
To sum up, I think the disadvantage overweight the other one. In my opinion, the students need not to rent house off campus.
濤濤對Jessie同學(xué)的作文的點(diǎn)評：
這篇作文就是4級熱點(diǎn)話題作文。整體文章邏輯條理不錯(cuò)。
但是，美中不足的是文章中詞匯表達(dá)中有不少錯(cuò)誤，例如：動(dòng)詞的'時(shí)態(tài)，謂語原形動(dòng)詞和非謂語動(dòng)詞，單詞詞性的混用，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)等沒有很好地區(qū)分。
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